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rozk ([personal profile] rozk) wrote2010-03-01 10:43 am

Oh, and Sappho

I wrote this as a tweet, which is an odd discipline...


Dark heaven's bright with stars
until
the half-moon rises washes out their light
silvers the dusky world
silvers the dusky world.

The repetition was an artefact of cutting and pasting, but works anyway, I think.

The moon is down, the Pleiades are set
Midnight ticks past and yearning until wet
I lie alone

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