ext_90832 ([identity profile] crowleycrow.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rozk 2010-12-23 01:17 am (UTC)

Really beautiful. Your marmoreal (yet feeling) classicism is very taking. One suggestion for the penultimate line -- maybe "forget him; but - as muse -- that poetry" ... It's a little difficult to parse that last thought in its very Latinate compression.

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