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May. 2nd, 2010 12:31 am
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SUMMER 1975

It was George Melly's fault strutting the bar
His suit mustard and scarlet check. How far
'Frankie and Johnny' started us off wrong
I cannot tell. Somehow his bloody song

was sound-track to our drinking. Was our fate
to hurt each other, even on that date
where later on she pulled me to her bed
with mockery and coaxing? I had said

it was a bad idea; 'compared to what?'
she said, which rather put me on the spot.
'Try it at least - you've only slept with men.'
A line that would come back to haunt her when

I'd say it back. She loved me, but would say
not quite enough to turn her fucking gay.

Date: 2010-05-02 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiplet.livejournal.com
This one, this one I quite like. The recursively allusive poetics of interpersonal relationships. Ah, language.

Date: 2010-05-02 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pandarus.livejournal.com
Jesus, woman - still bringing the awesome!

::applauds::

Date: 2010-05-02 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pandarus.livejournal.com
(Have you considered tagging the sonnets, so that one can readily have a page on which they're archived together?)

Date: 2010-05-02 03:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] time-freak.livejournal.com
This is awesome. Sad but funny, quirky, camp, intelligent.

Rather inspirational.

Date: 2010-05-02 10:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ffutures.livejournal.com
I love this one.

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