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Beloved, you're my life, so let's agree
that what we've got now lasts eternally.
You gods, stand as her good word's guarantee
that she speaks truely from the heart. Thus we
Shake hands. It's peace and not a victory.
We'll live in bliss forever faithfully.

Date: 2010-10-03 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] swisstone.livejournal.com
This is considerably better than Guy Lee's Oxford translation.

Date: 2010-11-27 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] swisstone.livejournal.com
Line 4 'truely' - another typo?

Date: 2010-11-27 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rozk.livejournal.com
No, an idiosyncratic Kaveney spelling...
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